Financial Times, 6 December 1985, by Michael Coveney Yonadab/Olivier ----------------------------------------------------------- Yonadab was a nephew of King David who, in the Book of Samuel (Chapter 2, verse 13), arranged for his cousing Amnon to sleep with his (Amnon's) sister Tamar. This act of incestuous rape, sponsored by a craftily anonymous Pandar, was revenged two years later by Amnon's brother, Absalom, who had Amnon killed. Peter Shaffer's first play since *Amadeus* relies heavily on the 1970 novel of Dan Jacobson, itself a richly imaginative meditation upon the Old Testament story that promotes Yonadab to the role of stage manager of phantoms, a spook spokesman mediating between the modern reader and David's brutalist court. "Princes do what we dream . . . they are not our masters but our salves. We commoners, fantasists, voyeurs, movers of furniture, carriers of messages, extras - - we are free men." Thus Jacobson's Yonadab. Shaffer's more banal Yonadab says "Princes make our dreams happen, or what is their use?" That gives an idea of the quality of adaptation. Shaffer's main departure then centres in a second act shadow play to the rape in which the precedent of Isis and Osiris is conjured to fulfil Yonadab's dream of reconciliatory marriage between Tamar and Absalom. But theatrical creation keeps bumping into theatrical reality as Tamar, scarred beyond redemption by the rape, bursts through the Egyptian charade to lead the destruction of Amnon at the sheep-shearing festival and claim war goddess status, stained in blood and defiantly feminist. Absalom is suspended from his fatal gnarled bough and Yonadab is left to ponder the riots engendered by creed and his own sorry "unattached" state. This is crudely and inefficiently laid out, to put it mildly. Alan Bates's Yonadab, a slinky eavesdropper with a grudge against the exalted section of the family, does not switch allegiances (as in Jacobson) out of expediency but out of self-delusion. The switch, in fact, is underplayed. So is his capacity for friendship and appreciation of others' qualities. Nor is this even a Salieri-like creation of envy and frustrated mediocrity. He is a bland MC, a sore thumb, a creep and a bore. In Jacobson, Yonadab is the refining historian and prophet, the setter of tone, the texture, the work itself. In Shaffer he is some clapped-out relation of Robert Bolt's Common Man, a theatrical anachronism. The National Theatre production under Peter Hall's direction does its best to disguise the dramatic tenuousness of the proceedings by dressing them in Japanese trimmings and drummings (music by Dominic Muldowney) and enclosing the action in a John Bury curtain store where Sir and Madam will be delighted to see that the vast acreage of Semitic inscriptions can be discreetly lit and drawn apart to suggest the historic old walls of Jerusalem or the sun- drenched agricultural funspot of Baal Hazor. The doomed sons of David, Amnon and Absalom, are given readings of simpering energy by Leigh Lawson and Anthony Head. With the rest of their long-haired brothers, they look like members of the Living Theatre limbering up for *The Mikado*. Patrick Stewart's David is a sad falling off from Jacobson's feckless, furtive monarch and resorts shamelessly to bad RSC sing-song inflections. At least we are spared the usual Shaffer coffee table ding- dong between two leading characters, although by the end of the very long evening I might have settled for that. In fact I did, with the abandoned Yonadab mouthing his reflections on the roots of political evil while Tamar breathes the righteous fire of the avenging goddess. Yonadab's moment of triumph is his announcement at court that not all the sons have been wiped out down on the farm, only Amnon. Bates's ascent of the cane and Wicker throne (that's right, Sir, comes with the curtains) does not succeed as a theatrical climax ("I stand before my father wearing a king for a pendant") as the ritual and bloodletting at court has been an uninteresting sham thus far. The savagery of the rape is let down because no dramatic language is invented to articulate the gnawing desperation and obsessiveness behind it. Instead we have a nude copulation scene with much tasteful back projection and buttock flexing -- from Leigh Lawson, at least. Miss Morgan, the evening's saving grace, drives on to complete a powerful transformation from girlish acquiescence to bloodcurdling anger. ----------------------------------------------------------- Bentley's Bedlam http://www.BetsyDa.com/bedlam.html This website is for information and entertainment purposes only and is not intended to infringe on copyrights held by others.