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Date: Tue, 28 Oct 1997 09:21:54 -0500
Subject: Your Story

Hi, Betsy.

Wow! You must have done a lot of research for your story! I love all the detail. Not to mention, the idea of Giles doing a song search makes me feel in good company. ;-)

I really think you have Giles down in this, and I like his friend John. I'm not sure what I think of Mark, though. That part seemed to happen to fast for me to get an impression of him.

I enjoyed this! Please write more!


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